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I ran fast from the mysterious shadow that was chasing me throughout the dark, creepy hallway. I turned at the corner to escape the shadow but ran into another shadow figure. The figure smirked as it raised a bat full with nails ,and hit me with the bat. Because of this I jerked awake with a loud ear piercing scream.
  "(name), are you okay," my mother yelled up to me with her voice full of concern. I could not reply to her for the dream had happen before but never this far.
  After a few minutes, I yelled back, "Yeah, just a nightmare." My mother knew nothing of this nightmare, for she would think I'm insane. I got up from my bed in my (f/c) tank top and (s/f/c) pajama short, and walked over to my full body mirror. I nearly screamed, because on my right shoulder was a bloody red spot. I felt fear grow in me, along with some other unnameable emotions. I knew I didn't have the spot last night, and there is nothing sharp in my room that could have gave me this.
  My mind then went back to the dream when the second shadowy figure had brought down that bat on me, it had to be then but how......
:icon2p-hetalia-kyo-chan:
This is an ideal that I have had for a while but never got around to doing it......... But I will need help so could you find some names for the 2P allies and the 2P axis for me, please!?!? I own myself and the ideal but not 2P hetalia, or you...............


I know it suck but try and enjoy..... Please!
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PLEASE continue!!!! This story has SERIOUS potential, and I just can't wait so see the next chapter!! I love 2P stories like this.
You have some serious mad skillz and this...Oh, I can just SMELL hard work in it. Keep it up!
I'm rooting for you and waiting for the next chappie of this awesome story!
Oh, and BTW, can you include 2P Spain Romano and the others? That would be totally cool!
I do not think that anyone else has as much potential and knowledge as you do. You have a real talent for writing.
Wishing for teh next chappie,
~Angel
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:iconaliceliddell123:
Mood: Optimism ~AliceLiddell123 Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Pweeeeeeeeese write more~
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:icon2p-hetalia-kyo-chan:
=2P-Hetalia-Kyo-Chan Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm working on it ^^'
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:iconaliceliddell123:
~AliceLiddell123 Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yaay~ ^_^
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~Slut-Of-The-World Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Some of the 2p! Names are Al for America, Oliver for England, Stephane for France, Matt for Canada, and Lutz for Germany. Those are the most popular I believe.
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=2P-Hetalia-Kyo-Chan Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Danks!
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~Slut-Of-The-World Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem.
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~MidnightShadows24 Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is amazing! Seriously, I want to see what you will do with this, it's very good, far better than anything I could ever write. Please continue, love!
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=2P-Hetalia-Kyo-Chan Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! And will do!
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~VODKAflagella Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
2p America... creepy...
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=2P-Hetalia-Kyo-Chan Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yep..... I'm trying to work on it some more but I also have dark romance too....
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