I ran fast from the mysterious shadow that was chasing me throughout the dark, creepy hallway. I turned at the corner to escape the shadow but ran into another shadow figure. The figure smirked as it raised a bat full with nails ,and hit me with the bat. Because of this I jerked awake with a loud ear piercing scream.
"(name), are you okay," my mother yelled up to me with her voice full of concern. I could not reply to her for the dream had happen before but never this far.
After a few minutes, I yelled back, "Yeah, just a nightmare." My mother knew nothing of this nightmare, for she would think I'm insane. I got up from my bed in my (f/c) tank top and (s/f/c) pajama short, and walked over to my full body mirror. I nearly screamed, because on my right shoulder was a bloody red spot. I felt fear grow in me, along with some other unnameable emotions. I knew I didn't have the spot last night, and there is nothing sharp in my room that could have gave me this.
My mind then went back to the dream when the second shadowy figure had brought down that bat on me, it had to be then but how......
You have some serious mad skillz and this...Oh, I can just SMELL hard work in it. Keep it up!
I'm rooting for you and waiting for the next chappie of this awesome story!
Oh, and BTW, can you include 2P Spain Romano and the others? That would be totally cool!
I do not think that anyone else has as much potential and knowledge as you do. You have a real talent for writing.
Wishing for teh next chappie,
~Angel
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